ok i like the idea but instead of a ring put in a small key know what i mean and change the poem around...cause ya the poem is a little umm to much umm the poem i rewrote starts after heart mind body and soul got it
In the palm of your hand
You hold the key to my heart
It will let you deep inside of me
Into every single part
Please be careful with this key
It means more than you'll ever know
It's everything that I ever was
And all that I'll become as I grow
You mean all the world to me
And I give you this key so you know
All that I am is completely yours
Heart, mind, body, and soul.
This is the key to my heart
It will let you deep inside of me
Into every single part
It's everything to me
and everything i am
You'll be there to see me grow
So i give you this key so you know
You are the one i am with
As i seal it with a kiss.
OK so thast what i got you figure it out...jsut chnage it around a little and like a diary key or something is always best instead of a ring cause its the KEY to your heart...well call me this weekend DONT FORGET OR ELSE!!
PS- yes i wrote the poem teehee